Nice to See You — Chapter 1

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HNGH... AAH

The Men's Pillar

AH... SIR...! SLOWER...

IT'S T-TOO DEEP...

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HUFF

HUFF

THAT HURTS...

BE SOFT...WITH MY NIPPLES...!

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FWOP FWOP

I NEVER KNEW A VIRGIN LIKE YOU COULD BE SUCH A FILTHY SLUT.

AH... NGH...

FUCK YEAH...!

DO YOU FUCK YOURSELF WITH THIS KIND OF THING EVERY DAY?

CAN YOU EVEN CALL YOURSELF A VIRGIN? YOUR HOLE SURE FUCKING KNOWS HOW TO TAKE IT.

LOOK AT YOU, TAKING IT ALL IN. YOU'D TAKE ANYTHING I PUT IN THERE, WOULDN'T YOU?

UNGH... NGH...

THE REAL THING IS GONNA BLOW YOUR MIND. YOU EXCITED? YOU'RE ALREADY CLENCHING JUST HEARING ABOUT IT.

HNGH...

YES, GIVE IT TO ME... NOT A TOY...

I NEED THE REAL THING. GIVE ME YOUR COCK...

COMING RIGHT UP. ONE SERVING OF HOT, FRESH COCK FOR YOUR LITTLE HOLE.

FUCK ME.

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SQUELCH SQUELCH

SQUELCH

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UWAAAAAAH!

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HNGH...

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IT FEELS LIKE MY BODY'S ON FIRE...

I NEED SOMETHING TO FILL ME UP.

SOMETHING REAL...

Is it just me, or did Ddeumbuk only start writing BL because they weren't good enough for serious literature? No shade to bl authors, but still lol.

This author thinks flowery words automatically make things hot. So naive. There’s zero raw energy, and the sex scenes are honestly just cringe.

the sex scenes are honestly just cringe.

Ddeumbuk is 100% a virgin. The people who find this hot are probably other virgins living in a fantasy world, too. I don't get how Buk-eo's novels are ranked lower than this trash.

Honestly, I could write better than this.

Yoonseobongi (@rio;9) Aren't you the one who's a loser virgin? If you're gonna psychoanalyze the author's sex life instead of just reading, then get lost. I guarantee the author's had way more action than you.

gyegye @gg_x000x Ddeumbuk is 100% a virgin. The people who find this hot are probably virgins living in a fantasy

"VIRGIN"

CRAP...

...IS IT THAT OBVIOUS?!

WAAAH!

KO IDEUM 26 YEARS OLD OCCUPATION: BL NOVELIST

ZERO SEXUAL EXPERIENCE

DOES SEX WITH MYSELF NOT COUNT?!

SO THAT'S CALLED MASTURBATION, BUDDY...

WELL WHAT ABOUT THIS?! + EXTENSIVE SEXUAL FANTASIES CREATED THROUGH THE POWER OF IMAGINATION!

HAAA...

THERE'S THIS ANONYMOUS ACCOUNT I STUMBLED UPON A FEW DAYS AGO...

gyegye @gg_x000x

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IT LOOKS LIKE A BURNER ACCOUNT FOR SCREAMING INTO THE VOID...

gyegye @gg_x000x

lmao, people actually find this "sub-dom" shit hot?

The details are so off. How are they even positioned? Stop trying to be poetic and fix the mechanics.

I guess writing such a turn-off of a character is a talent in and of itself.

...AND WHILE I'VE ALWAYS BRUSHED OFF HATE COMMENTS...

BEING CALLED A VIRGIN REALLY HIT A NERVE...

...MOSTLY BECAUSE IT'S TRUE.

I'VE NEVER EVEN BEEN IN A REAL RELATIONSHIP, LET ALONE HAD SEX.

I'M TERRIFIED THAT ONE DAY, MY TOTAL LACK OF EXPERIENCE WILL BE EXPOSED.

While the premise is interesting, the plot feels a bit flat. Since it's a dark atmosphere, the first sex scene should be more visceral and detailed to really spark the readers' imaginations.

We're sharing this after a deep dive with the team, especially since your last work was such a hit! :)

AND NOW I HAVE WRITER'S BLOCK... THIS IS HELL...

I think things might move faster if we discuss this in person. Do you have time for a meeting?

Thanks for the feedback! No need for a meeting. I'll revise it and get back to you by next week.

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WHAT THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO DO?!

I NEED TO MAKE THIS CAREER LAST...

...WRITING DOWN MY FANTASIES IS THE ONLY THING I'M ACTUALLY GOOD AT.

I'M NOT THE TYPE WHO CAN WORK A REGULAR JOB WITH OTHER PEOPLE.

IF THIS DOESN'T WORK OUT, I'M DESTINED TO DIE ALONE...

I DON'T WANT TO GO OUT LIKE THAT.

GULP

I'M SOCIALLY AWKWARD AND HAVE NOTHING TO MY NAME.

THIS IS MY ONLY HOPE. I'VE GOTTA MAKE SURE I DON'T SOMEHOW LOSE IT...

I WONDER HOW GOOD IT WOULD FEEL TO ACTUALLY DO IT.

IF I HAD THAT OPPORTUNITY, I PROBABLY WOULDN'T HAVE TO BE WORRY ABOUT ANY OF THIS CRAP.

OH, THE TOY I ORDERED...

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I THOUGHT MY IMAGINATION WOULD BE ENOUGH...

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...HAA.

IN MY HEAD...

...I CAN DO ALL THE THINGS I CAN'T DO IN REAL LIFE...

...BUT IT'S NOT ENOUGH.

HAAA... NGH!

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HUH...?

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?!?!

HUH?!

UWAAAAH?!

!!

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CLENCH

NGH... AAH...

WH-WHAT THE...? I COULD HAVE SWORN NOBODY LIVES IN THAT APARTMENT...

HAAA

HE WAS WATCHING ME...

DID HE...

...SEE THE WHOLE THING?!